as I sit here i think to myself how I got such a beautiful person in my life.
looking at her while the sun bounces off
her smooth silky brown hair.
as I stare into her eyes,
I see the happiness that knows we'll be together forever.
a relationship is a beautiful thing.
peaceful.
a relationship can erupt into something spectacular, or
it can twist you down a path of complete darkness and depression.
as if u were drowning without the very thought of her being by you.looking at her while the sun bounces off
her smooth silky brown hair.
as I stare into her eyes,
I see the happiness that knows we'll be together forever.
a relationship is a beautiful thing.
like a flower blowing in the wind
not to be disturbed...peaceful.
a relationship can erupt into something spectacular, or
it can twist you down a path of complete darkness and depression.
getting close to someone is a gigantic step.
wondering if she will ( as people say )eat my heart.
anxious to hear her voice caresing my very ears.
it happens...
SHE EATS MY HEART!!!
as I sit here heartless.
I have to ask myself.
will I ever love again.wondering if she will ( as people say )eat my heart.
anxious to hear her voice caresing my very ears.
it happens...
SHE EATS MY HEART!!!
as I sit here heartless.
I have to ask myself.
will I ever care about another.
the way I did for her.
all I have to do is move on and hope.
to reclaim my heart for the one I truly love.
7 comments:
oh wow.
this is a super good poem. i like it a lot! nice job!
Aww!!!how lovely. Your so predictable good. I love it!!it's goes on smoothly and nice...ashamely beautiful.later
this is beautiful desmond! who is this girl you speak of? Wow, this is seriously beautiful and amazing
*hugs*
dez
this makes me think.. alot.. hmmm.. it intrigues me.. who/what is this about? and if anyone eats your heart i will kill them lol :)
Wow. I don't know if you meant to create that allusion to the hearts poem we read in class but that's what I thought of when I read that last line. Good poem.
An allusion to Alice Walker's poem, Never Offer Your Heart To Somebody Who Eats Hearts, eh? Very nice. I think you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. Maybe you should use some synonyms for some of the words in here and make it sound more unique, you know? But this is a good topic to write about.
I like that you added the stuff after your "SHE ATE MY HEART!" part. It seems to add more.
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